Tranquility

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    This one is about you, With a K. (Withake). Just a memory of a newborn napping miracle and a holiday with the extended family. It had been so long since a baby had been around our reactions were exagerated to say the least. Hope you can relate.

    Tranquility


    Peacefull lying there
    engaged in your slumber
    watching your warm glow of love
     effect your surroundings like no other

    Taking in your essence
    addicted to your smell
    your eyes flutter
    my senses reel
    Oh! the way you make me feel.

    Your warmth and sweetness
    open hearted and pure
    A dream come true
    one that will endure

    Joy like no other
    a new leaf on the old family tree
    a chip off the old block
    An answer to prayers
    for me

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    sevyn7 commented on Tranquility

    01-13-2011

    Sweet poem, nothing like a new bundle of love to adore.
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    Tempestlady

    01/13/2011

    It was fun just to watch all of the women and some of the men dote, and get silly. Thanks for reading...Tlady

    HIP13044b commented on Tranquility

    12-22-2010

    This is a great little poem. There's no better feeling in the world is there?
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    Tempestlady

    12/23/2010

    No, there really is no better feeing in the world for me. Thanks so much for stopping by to read it. Merry Christmas and Happy New year. Check out "born to you and me" it is awe inspiring. Write on....

    HarverTomsson commented on Tranquility

    12-15-2010

    Imprinting by smell works both ways in nature. Manufactured bonding through snuggles is more fun, though. Harv
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    Tempestlady

    12/15/2010

    Yes, i believe it is too....LOL

    cliftondurant commented on Tranquility

    12-15-2010

    so beautiful the gift of a new born is a wonderful thing you express it so well thanks for sharing
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    Tempestlady

    12/26/2010

    It remains wonderful, happy holidays to you and yours. Write on...

    devaamido commented on Tranquility

    12-15-2010

    What a sweet and poignant poem! Perfect in structure as well as imagery and sentiment. Obviously 10+.........................d
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