time

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    time

    more time will pass,

    this feeling will go,

    smiling nervously,

    as i see your face,

    what do i say?,

    how do i react?

    maybe i am dreaming,

    and i'll wake,

    i want this to be true,

    your so good to me,

    your smiling back,

    you touch my face,

    you wipe my tears,

    i am learning to trust,

    its been a while,

    you move in closer,

    your lips on mine,

    i close my eyes,

    i relax,

    we pull apart,

    you called me Precious,

    and we have all the time we want.

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    Chaos128 commented on time

    12-16-2009

    A moment well worth building on; hope, vulnerability and anticipation together in a delicate, fragile package. Very well done!
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    jtmc4444 commented on time

    11-17-2009

    Real nice. Short-sweet and flows. I am happy to have had the chance to read your Poem. Have a great Tuesday.
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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