one day

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    one day

    one day I'll see you,
    and you will know,
    how much I loved you,
    because it will show.
    i was a baby,you left behind,
    you had said,
    yes, shes mine.
    we had to leave,
    and you were ill,
    I was so young
    I did'nt know,
    I prayed to Jesus,
    for many years,
    please bring my Daddy
    back to me,
    now I am older,
    and understand more,
    the right thing was done.
    but for who?

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    rose081900 commented on one day

    02-16-2009

    short, sweet and simple along with some passion:).

    kenparme commented on one day

    11-23-2008

    good poem-makes me feel for you

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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