oh God

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    oh God

    I wish,
    The rain was softer,
    The trees were bigger,
    The lights were brighter,
    Oh God,
    Take me home,
    The leaves are fairies,
    Rushing to the ground,
    carry me home,little ones.
    Oh God.

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    laydbak1 commented on oh God

    06-10-2009

    Nicely written, but kind of leaves me feeling the story isn't finished yet; like there's more to come.... a nice read though... enjoyed it...

    olalekan commented on oh God

    02-27-2009

    Good read. But you have more row to hoe, so God won't take you home now. Whatever it is, God can turn the tide, and I pray He turns it.

    NayInLove commented on oh God

    02-01-2009

    nice read!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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