Thin Line Between Love and Hate

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    Kids were bothering me, so I decide to write a poem to relax.

    4:10pm - 7/7/09

    Thin Line Between Love and Hate

    Always crying, - the migraines, the tears,
    the whining the fighting and all of the fears.
    The constant I want you, anxiety for show.
    Nap time, hungry?  I just don't know.
    I always keep face, the Virgo you know,
    but when I get frustrated,
    Roger Rabbit's on the go.
    I can feel the steam building,
    until my face is red.
    Steam just flowing out my ears,
    can't control what's in my head.
    No matter what the consequence,
    of what is on the plate.
    As a mom you must hold face,
    before it is too late.
    We cannot disrupt out future,
    by blowing up you know.
    Whether you're O'sama Ladin,
    or, you're Oprah on a show.
    Everyone is hiding something,
    just leave their soul alone.
    What matters is the giving something,
    to those you do not know.

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    LBoogie commented on Thin Line Between Love and Hate

    11-16-2009

    I like poetic very nice piece of work, Keeo up the good work

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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