THE WAITING!

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    THE WAITING!

     Why do i wait for you?
    why do i let myself believe in you?
    you tell me you will be there
    so i sit and i wait,
    wondering what would be our fate?
    i place my heart out there for all to see to only have it stomped on by so many feet,
    why do i have this trusting soul? this uncold heart? this way about me exposed for all to see,
    why do i care as i do?
    why do i believe in something so untrue?
    well i geuss i will never know, so i will push alone on this lonely dessolate road,
    hoping one day i will find my peice of mind, my hope, my life, and to no longer wait for you for i know you will never be true,
    so no longer will i wait, i will live my life as i see fit, you  will no longer make me sit and   wait.
    for i alone will make my own way without me sitting here for i will no longer sit here and  WAIT!

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    countrypoet commented on THE WAITING!

    11-26-2009

    Thank you for sharing this very inspiring poem.Those of us,who have a compassionate heart are sometines taken advantage of by cruel,insensitive people.Do not let them harden your heart or else you will eventually become like them.Just simply walk proud;knowing that you are a good person with a beautiful soul and if someone can not fully appreciate that ,it is their loss not yours. Someday you will meet the right man,who will cherish you for the beautiful person that you are.
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    DeepBlueSeas commented on THE WAITING!

    05-30-2009

    nice, i like it. again a good reflection of how i fell, al though not exactly, my situation differs a bit, but yes i am tired of waiting.
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    Dimoyas commented on THE WAITING!

    05-30-2009

    You go girl! Sounds like this poem helped you make up your mind to go about your life without the lies of one who wasted your time. This is inspirational to me as I sit and wait.
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    kmooney commented on THE WAITING!

    05-30-2009

    Good for you Snow. Why should you have to put forth all the effort and only wait for reciprocation? You're better than that and life is too short. There are plenty of guys out there (or women) who would appreciate your devotion. Am I getting this right Snow? I can hear your frustration...the cry of a single mom, I guess. But you're so incredibly young. And, from what I can tell, good looking too. Hang in there. I like your poem. See, it made me think. I will read on... K
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