INVISABLE ME

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    INVISABLE ME

    i sit here , you sit there,
    i know you see me, i talk but no one listens,
    am i really here?
    i wonder if i exist to you?
    i know you exist to me,
    i only exist to please you, but am i happy?
    i do feel, i do love, i have a heart , but do you know that??
    i only feel like am am just an empty shell, no more,
    i am only visable when you need me to do something for you,
    then i am put back on my shelf to collect dust till i am in need again!!

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    TREVON commented on INVISABLE ME

    01-09-2012

    you are not invisible, and you are more than, one how feels the need of others

    redbloodink commented on INVISABLE ME

    02-25-2010

    your needed all the time... great write sit on no shelf! for no-one...... red

    gogant commented on INVISABLE ME

    01-18-2010

    A clear and expressive form of being only wanted when we're needed. I'm sure you are very much wanted and needed by lots of friends and relatives. A very well composed work of poetry....

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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