Ode to MS. Havashame

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    Ode to MS. Havashame
    oh dear Ms. Havashame,
    oh i how i feel your pain,
    to believe in love
    to only have it run away
    how we put our hearts on our sleeve
    to only have it torn away
    i feel the pain of believing in love to only have it taken from me
    why do we trust?
    why do we believe?
    will there ever be someone for thee?
    unlucky in love,
    unlucky in life
    why do we keep keep going on?
    will there ever be happiness?
    or only the beat of my own heart?
    is there a light at the end of my darkness?
    or only lonely despair?
    should i ever try to love again?
    that my friends shall aways remain a mystery to me!

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    WinterFrost commented on Ode to MS. Havashame

    07-05-2009

    I'm here to play with Miss Estella again ... Ms. Havasham.
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    lowkey commented on Ode to MS. Havashame

    05-31-2009

    this poem was very touching we all yearn for love lost keep writing to inspire the masses
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    Superman commented on Ode to MS. Havashame

    05-30-2009

    i realy realy like this ur a good poet lol but wat i want to noe is who is ms.havashame lol well very god work
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    snowdove

    05/30/2009

    english class..GREAT EXPECTATIONS..MRS. HAVASHAM ..she was a woman who was deeply in love until here wedding day and her love left her standing there heart in hand to never be happy again...story of my life

    snowdove

    05/30/2009

    english class..GREAT EXPECTATIONS..MRS. HAVASHAM ..she was a woman who was deeply in love until here wedding day and her love left her standing there heart in hand to never be happy again...story of my life

    kmooney commented on Ode to MS. Havashame

    05-30-2009

    Poor Snow...is Ms. Havashame a kindred spirit or an alter ego? Of is she one in the same? Sounds to me like you have been hurt...a lot. I am sorry for your pain. You write very well though. I like your style. Your poems flow nicely and are from the heart. Do you have any that are more uplifting? Check out my poem The Frisbee Catching Dog. It will make you smile. Also read A Girl I Once Knew ( A Cinderella Story). I think you'll like them. I would really like to hear your thoughts on
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    snowdove

    05/30/2009

    the ode to M s. Havavshame is like my life story. it reminds me of my life a lot but i wont have a happy ending like her neice did. thank you for reading you made my day. thankyou

    lonewolf commented on Ode to MS. Havashame

    04-29-2009

    very good. enjoyed the read
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