The Sun

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    The Sun
    Dreaming away on a warm summer day
    Thoughts are bright, when once they were gray
    She walks toward me sun in her hair
    I pinch myself to make sure I'm there
    Into my arms she tumbles with a smile
    A tender moment, loves' sweet style
    We fall to the ground, light as a feather
    I picture this moment, it will last forever
    Touching soft skin, drowning in love
    Hand in hand, we fit like a glove
    How did I survive without you by my side?
    When you are sanctuary, where my heart hides
    Our hearts beat faster, entwined as one
    Warming anew, our love like the sun

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    aries14 commented on The Sun

    02-18-2009

    nice, it's deep ...i like it
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    graceladymn commented on The Sun

    02-11-2009

    Life, how wonderful! Great room, keep digging, there is yet a man wanting to escape the dungeon of dreams straight into bliss.
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    clown commented on The Sun

    12-30-2008

    Finally poem's that ryhnm! i like.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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