The Solid Wall of Night

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The world of night and those "creatures" who inhabit it seems like it is literally a different world.

The Solid Wall of Night

Within a spare-change moment
the solid wall of night
dissolves to issue forth again
ghost-images of twilight.

Creatures of the dark now
are forced to hide away
to wait with nerveless patience
to sleep through another day.

In homes and cities and on farms
alarms and roosters crow
another day to beat is here
another row to hoe.

Creatures of the day now
are forced to raise their heads.
Most work, some play, some rule the day
some wish they'd stayed in bed.

The hours pass, for some they fly
for some they're simply done
leaving creatures of the day
to wait for another sun.

Within a spare-change moment
the solid wall of night
reforms again, restores again
the world of banished light.

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ansari commented on The Solid Wall of Night

06-23-2010

It's marvellous, so full of images. an interesting poem, a journey through a day. my own poem ' this moment' has a few images but yours is great. thank you.

Teardrops commented on The Solid Wall of Night

04-03-2010

this is my second time reading this and i see another point of view I used to work the night shift and it is like another world different for the day . Truly a great poem Marie

cmlestrade commented on The Solid Wall of Night

03-27-2010

loved this. So beautifully written, nice theme and rhyme. Great word choice,very well done.

Tinytree commented on The Solid Wall of Night

03-23-2010

I really enjoyed this. It is worded perfectly to bring forth the images of day and night. It's a favorite for me.

harveygrund

03/24/2010

Thank you very much!

icu2 commented on The Solid Wall of Night

03-18-2010

Harvey, this is lovely. I would say...you have two themes here, and I like the sort of, "redeeming the time" theme the best.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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