The Sentinel

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    The Sentinel

    At the edge of a forest,
    in a clearing, on a bluff,
    stands a solitary oak tree
    cloaked in burly bark, all rough.

    On arms that stretch to heaven
    perch a crown of autumn gold
    that flutter to cull secrets
    off the winds that blow so cold.

    No one knows when it took root there -
    how it came to guard the way -
    standing resolute in purpose,
    marking the birth of each new day.
    Daring to face down gale force storms,
    defiance wills the crown unbowed -
    and in aftermath of battle
    finds no dangers' been allowed.

    And with ensuing victory
    comes a stillness soft and long -
    forest sounds fall silent just to hear
    the timber's righteous song.

    As if it were a . . . heart beat . . .
    cloaked in burly bark, all rough -
    disguised as just an oak tree,
    in a clearing, on a bluff.



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    jeanpnkldyg commented on The Sentinel

    08-15-2009

    I can see the tree in my mind's eye. I would welcome your comments on my work.

    wheelsal commented on The Sentinel

    06-15-2009

    Perfect symmetry. One of the few poets I've read on this sight that knows poetry. Can't wait to read more.

    Sleeves commented on The Sentinel

    05-18-2009

    Is the tree just a tree? The road in fact a road? To me, obviously not. But what's really great in this poem is how effortlessly coherent it is in style, topic and visuals. Solid piece. 10.

    Gman9259 commented on The Sentinel

    05-09-2009

    Excellent feeling and flow. i see it! great visuals!

    dancingbear commented on The Sentinel

    04-21-2009

    Nice soft cadence. Thanks.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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