THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET

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    THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET

    SHE SURE WAS LIKE NO OTHER
    THAT WAS PLAIN TO SEE
    THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET
    SHE WAS DEFINITLY FOR ME

    SHE WAS HONEST AND OUTSPOKEN
    I KNEW SHE'D NEVER LIE TO ME
    LIKE I SAID SHE WASN'T LIKE THE OTHERS
    WHO TOLD MORE LIESTHAN SALT IN THE SEA

    SHE HAD DEEP DARK HAIR AND
    DEEP DARK BROWN EYES
    THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET
    I AM GOING TO MAKE HER MINE

    A SMILE THAT COMES FROM NOWHERE
    BUT COMPLETLY FILLS THE ROOM
    WITH MORE RAIDIANCE THAN THE SUNSHINE
    BUT WAS SOFTERTHAN THE MOON

    WHEN SHE PUT HER ARMS AROUND ME
    THEY HAD MORE WARMTH THAN ACACOON
    THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET
    SHE SURE COULDMAKE ME SWOON

    THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET
    THE MOST BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THE ROOM

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    WordSlinger commented on THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET

    09-22-2009

    Yep, the beginning is flowing sweet, it's all good, I'm just wondering what happend in the room..
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    Tempy commented on THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET

    07-25-2009

    this is really sweet, i liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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    BILLY28

    07/25/2009

    Good morning, Thank you and I shall be sure to check you out in a little bit. Since I am new to this it is fantastic to be able to share and meet new writers. We all bring something to the table right. See you soon Billy28

    optimistic commented on THE PRETTIEST GIRL ON THE PLANET

    07-24-2009

    Very simple yet very broad statement about a woman true and beautiful to you Iike the beggining of the poem really caught my eye.
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    BILLY28

    07/25/2009

    Thanks again, my friend and like i promised I shall read more of your work this weekend. And hey that Tempy girl pretty good Hey

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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