BLUM PARK

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       THIS IS JUST A HAPPENING AN EVENT THAT I WAS TOTALY ENLIGHTENED TO EXPERIENCE.
       JUST THOUGHT I'D SHARE

    BLUM PARK

       Sittin in BLUM PARK
    on a saturday,rainy afternoon
    amongst the drunks and crackheads
    and all other types of loons
    some have become trusted friends
    the others are specimens of bafoons
    you'll find some shady characters
    and a few bipolar girls
       I've seen things strange,
       through out my travels
       but this is one wierd world

      The mayhem smells like afterbirth
        and would make most faces curl
     The cloudsand rain and people
    a relentless neverending swirl
         A world of such joy and compassion
           in a slumlord of despair
       A pretty girl gave me some ciggarettes
      she was a lovely schitzaphrenic
     and introduced herself as Evett

       Sittin  in BLUM PARK
     on a saturday,sainy afternoon
     It is like the beer I drank
      the lightning and the thunder
     was collabarating in my bladder
      making want to urinate
        So next time your bored or feel alone,
      Bring your ass to old BLUM PARK
      whatever you do,don't be late
      on a saturdaY,RAINY AFTERNOON

               WRITTEN BY
           WILLIAM H. KYTTLE JR.
                  SUBMITTED 7/25/2009

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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    BILLY28’s Poems (6)

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