The past is gone

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  • Forgiveness

    The past is gone
    The past is gone
    The future next
    All things said
    There is regret
    BUT
    I'm looking forward
    To what is next
    All that' happened
    I will forget
    We'll not always
    see eye to eye
    We must give space
    For each to try
    To be themselves
    What that may be
    It's up to God
    Alone HE sees
    The world goes round
    With each so diff
    And life would be boring
    Ya know
    IF
    we all thought the same

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    ListninEar commented on The past is gone

    09-15-2009

    This poem seems to link all of us. we've all made our share of mistakes, it's good to see a fellow Christian admit to having done so and also to reach out, recognizing that our differences are actually gifts from God. It speaks to me on several different levels. You may want to re-visit the ending and fine tune there.
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    lightcourier commented on The past is gone

    05-24-2009

    Nice simple poem. I didn't really like the ending...it sounded a bit over the top. But I liked the overall theme of the work. Flowed well and was nice to read. Thanks!
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