The Life Inside of Me.

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  • WishfulPoet94
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A cinquain.

The Life Inside of Me.

The life inside of me,

Who is she?

Is she me?

A split personality?

Or an alternate of thee?


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JadedJezzabel commented on The Life Inside of Me.

08-01-2009

women have many different sides to them selves.....and you are almost a grown woman so take the time to make the introduction of the sides of you.......and then make the choice to love them all

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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