Debatable Day.

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    Debatable Day.



    I can't have a voice,
    They keep taking it from me.
    Strip me of every choice,
    And criticize what they see.

    No longer do I have opinions.
    Fore they try to change 'em.
    Nor do I have thoughts
    That matter to them.

    Anything I have to say,
    I simply won't. 
    They'll dismiss it anyway.
    Conversing is an easy don't.

    "No sir, yes sir,"
    Everyday, all I can say.

    "Yes ma'am, no ma'am,"
    All day, only all I say.

    "No thanks,"
    I'll finally say.

    "No thank you,
    I won't remain this way.
    I'd like to have my voice back,
    And continue my debatable day."

    I'll speak again,
    I'll voice thoughts and opinions.
    I'll commit my sin
    Of being me.

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    Kaiprin commented on Debatable Day.

    12-23-2009

    "I'll commit my sin of being me." That's one of the best lines I've read on this site. Bravo. You really have a knack for poetry. Look forward to your progress.

    WishfulPoet94

    12/27/2009

    Thank you, I'll definitely have to post newer poems.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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