The Fight

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  • My Feelings
    • Scorpia
    • trust everyone, get hurt...trust no one, get nothing

    The Fight

     THe room we share, is now a battlefield.
    Day and night, cannons are exploding.
    Insults are flying like missles to the other side,
    our anger reaches the other person.
    Either side has losses.
    Whether its happiness or love.
    We started this fight two long months ago,
    and neither of us remebers why.
    BUt I know, I can not lose.

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    hdmac commented on The Fight

    07-18-2009

    Good short poem. Good use of imagery. You are so young, yet you write like a much older person. Keep strong.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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