Just Look

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  • Feelings
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  • Life
    • Scorpia
    • trust everyone, get hurt...trust no one, get nothing

    Poem Commentary

    People don't really know each other's emotions. It may all be  fake, an act they put on. You would never know, unless you go into them, then you would know how they actually feel. To when to care, or avoid, is really knowing someone.

    Just Look

    You would never see the hot lava, bubbling to the surface, if you just glance.
    You would just see a put-together girl.
    You have to find, to dig, to fully look.

    But you won't, because you don't believe in the costumes we wear.
    Our clothes, our expressions; they're all coustume, fake.

    Under the sweetness, I may be cruel.
    But you'd never know, becuase you never bothered to look.

    Under the calmness, I may be furious.
    But you'd never know, beccuae you never bothered to look.

    I may be sweet, I may be cruel.
    I may be peaceful, I may be angry.
    But you'd never know, because you never bothered to look.

    Why don't you look?

    Just once?

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    Helios commented on Just Look

    08-04-2009

    Ahh... praises from this inexperience poet. Your poems are beyond your years. If you get a chance, please give me your opinion of my poetry.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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