The best things in life

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    The best things in life

     The best things in life are for free,
    Like sound of wind gushing through trees;
    Feel the raindrops touch your face
    And fragrance of the wet earth after so many days.
    Sight of the fog on a chilly morn,
    Feels as if a new self in me is born.

    The soft caring touch of a loving hand,
    A jolly conversation with a friend you had.
    A sudden win after many a setbacks,
    Fills your life with the joy it lacks.
    And after a hard days work, a cozy sleep.
    Aren't the best things in life just for free??

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    BrittKun commented on The best things in life

    12-20-2009

    Well yes the best things in life are free!!! Very good poem keep up the good work! : ) 10
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    jesusfreake commented on The best things in life

    08-04-2009

    great this opem is great...very free and kind and warming...its a nice feeling i get when i read ur poetry, especially this one its very descripitive and reminds me of how important the free things in life are....kudos this was a fantastic job!!!!
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    tanmayC

    08/05/2009

    thanx a lot... this means a lot to me

    Tempy commented on The best things in life

    07-31-2009

    The soft caring touch of a loving hand, A jolly conversation with a friend you had. A sudden win after many a setbacks, Fills your life with the joy it lacks. i liked this part the best. It doesn't cost a thing to use your mind to show you care or just share your mind
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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