I am Free

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    I am Free

     I am free like the birds of the sky;
    Powerful, stronger, I am on a high.
    A vagabond; Alone I wander.
    No one to care, no one to hinder.
    Like the desert storm, I run wild,
    For I am also this Earth's child.
    Set ablaze like a forest fire,
    My energy and spirit have gone higher.
    Enthusiastic as the dancing waves of sea.
    I don't choose the best, it chooses me!!

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    JayJ420 commented on I am Free

    06-16-2010

    the second line really speaks if u consider it as a forbidden fruit....its a crazy rush, but is it good for you?....10 from me
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    cousinsoren commented on I am Free

    03-14-2010

    So much philosophy is expounded in a few impeccably craafted line, by a young poet who knows his art. Watch out. as this poet moves upward, poem by poem, to the peak of a poetic Mount Everest, which he will conquer bya and bye. My rating goes beyond what OP permits = 10xx10+
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    1990lh commented on I am Free

    08-15-2009

    wow great poem love it you are like a wild free soul, i love how you compare youself to nature, becuz nature is wild and untamable, you said alot in a few words. all in all great job
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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