Take Me... :: ImStillHere :: Original Poetry

Take Me...

Take me,
                                           I want you.
Tonight.
                        Oh please…
Take pleasure
                                            in bringing
me down on
                          my knees…

Incubbus,
                                             killer,
tormenter,
                           the pain…
Take me
                                              all over
again and
                             again…

My screams
                                                in the night,
your name
                             and my God…
Silly, I know,
                                                   as you
string me
                                along…

But the pleasure
                                                      of you
as you take
                                all of me…
One touch
                                                        from you
and all common
                                 sense flees….

Help me
                                                           I’m falling
apart with
                                 each gasp…
Wishing
                                                            that tonight
will always
                                   last…

But wonder
                                                             and think
of what pleasure
                                  you hold…
And deep
                                                               from within
a monster
                                  unfolds…

And it grows
                                                                as it learns
all of
                                    your tricks…
Every knot,
                                                                  every bite,
every sratch
                                    all the whips…

Suddenly
                                                                     all things
are not
                                      as they seem…
Submission
                                                                     isnt all
that cut out
                                       for me….

Take me,
                                           I want you.
Tonight.
                        Oh please…
The look
                                            on your face
as your down
                         on your knees….

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VaZFynest commented on Take Me... 07-27-2011: great write....very sensual...breathy......eminates sex oozing from your pores.......kudos!; Reply to Comment

ImStillHere 07/28/2011: Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it ~Audrey

slimgoodwoody commented on Take Me... 07-14-2011: Awesome poem! I love the structure, it provides a pause----- almost like the reader is out of breath, panting and speaking between breaths. Thats what I envisioned as I read it!; Reply to Comment

ImStillHere 07/21/2011: Thanks :) That's what i was going for. I'm glad you liked it ~Audrey

Solaris commented on Take Me... 07-11-2011: good poem love the bdsm refferance and it was very sexualy gripping good job; Reply to Comment

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