Still loving you... I wont let go

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umm i hope you guys enjoy it going through a tough time and i am a little shaky with my words right now havent been ablt to write anything in a while cause my topic is mostly love but i kind of went to lost love here. rate comment recommend it to your friends enjoy.

Still loving you... I wont let go

The ocean breeze
whispers your name
a lonely seagull
flies above my head.

A darkened sky
that filled with stars
comes crashing down
because your just too far.

The way you smile
the way you laugh
you know it breaks
my heart in half

The scent of your perfume
the softness of your skin
the twinkle in your eyes
that makes me fall again

To have the thought
of you in my head
and to know that
I cant hold you in the end

Your heart is far
but yo are so close
and to let you go
would be my biggest remorse

day by day
hour by hour
your in my head
thats all that matters

The lonely seagull
finds his mate
the one he has been fighting for
all this day.

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anamenonelseis commented on Still loving you... I wont let go

08-08-2009

wow. i can really relate to that. my husband is in prison, has been for three years. thats how i feel so close yet so far.

TwistedAce commented on Still loving you... I wont let go

08-08-2009

Nice way to express lost love, the comparison to a seagull was a nice touch also.

GentleT commented on Still loving you... I wont let go

08-07-2009

Your words so a desire in your heart for someone you admire.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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