Simplicity

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5 minute lyric poem. i don't like titles much howvever i hope this on is appropriate.

Simplicity

A summer's day steeped in heat,
a tender kiss so lovely and sweet,
a blooming flower that smiles to the sun,
and a companionable friend rolled into one.

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Artie commented on Simplicity

10-22-2009

Nice piece - call it a happy day burrito! 10 from me

Paleidia commented on Simplicity

07-12-2009

This sounds like a perfect day! Beautifully written!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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