Fight with the world

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  • Struggle

    Fight with the world

    when people hound from every direction,
    different sides of one connection,
    and confusion sneakily resides,
    and, then stops, the flowing tides,
    of my sacred imagination,
    restricts my creations,
    then refusals do conform,
    creating inside unrully storms,
    tug against tug, on either side,
    tugging war; i cannot hide,
    their hold, it soon will fray,
    when lightning holds clouds at bay,
    i mightily tear from their clinging hold,
    today, my soul, went unsold. 

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    Artie commented on Fight with the world

    06-27-2009

    It seems there is much uncertainty in this piece. Like awaiting your fate to unfold before you.I wonder how long ago you wrote this? I love the way you tell a story. 10 from me.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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