Shutting You out

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Shutting You out

I'm shutting you out
For I can't keep you in
A festering sore
An unforgivable sin

I'm shutting you out
My heart is locked tight
Blackened by lies
Unmentionable fright

I've shut you out
I won't let you back in
Bothering me more
Getting under my skin
This festering sore
This unforgivable sin
Won't happen again
For I...
I won't let you back in

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NitaBoo commented on Shutting You out

01-11-2011

Pretty good...I like the flow and consistency in attitude...

dahlusion commented on Shutting You out

10-28-2010

Nothing like both barrels from the hip, a straight-shooter with powerful diction and delivery. Bravo!! Peace and Light, dah

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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