I Bleed

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  • Emotional
    • DestinedQueen
    • The very long and tedious task of making up a portfolio is daunting!!!!!

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    This is my pen challenge poem...

    I Bleed

    I bleed
    Not the crimson of blood
    But the black and blue of liquid ink

    I bleed
    Onto the pristine surface
    Layed out before me smooth and perfect

    I bleed
    Not from the arteries of body
    But from the tip of my stylus

    I bleed
    My emotions out like sickness
    Purging my body and soul of my demons

    I bleed
    Through my pen
    Writing my words in black blood
    So you may see and understand how
    I bleed

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    loveswar09 commented on I Bleed

    12-11-2009

    It's good. I never would of thought by the title that ink is what you meant. =)
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    scarlet commented on I Bleed

    10-25-2009

    amazing write,the flow is wonderfu, writing has always been one of the best forms of therapy.
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    nini2323 commented on I Bleed

    10-05-2009

    The heart may bleed but the pen never does, interesting write I feel similarly
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    dawnjyc commented on I Bleed

    07-26-2009

    This piece is fantastic. Dark and the imagery is clear, your words are captivating. I am blown away.
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    na2011 commented on I Bleed

    07-26-2009

    wow drak and wow ( u can't see but i'm snaping my fingers) this was great well done
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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