Night Dance

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Night Dance

Dance with me under the stars
On sun-warmed walkways
In the cool of night
Cold feet-toe curling ecstasy
   When no one's around

Each--tentative--graceful move
Each gentle grasp of solidity
Followed by wishes on shooting stars
               In our eyes

Pushing, pulling, penetrating
Body, mind, and soul
Like the moon and tide
I follow-yet in my own way
              LEAD

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RandyFrost commented on Night Dance

08-30-2009

i love this poem....its so erotic and to the point...a man that can lead well i guess is every girls dream?

marxred commented on Night Dance

08-27-2009

quite sensuous DQ! touch right down to the toe curling ecstacy! very very nice! dennis

Mangus commented on Night Dance

07-25-2009

the ability to pack a large amount in few words is rare. You have wonderful gift and you use well

Hanna commented on Night Dance

07-03-2009

I think this is more romatic, and passionate yet in an innocent way. It is erotic in the lightest sense of the word/meaning. It also enlightens me on teh esssence of being tru to oneself. I like it

daniel081180 commented on Night Dance

07-01-2009

i have to say what a great read and so much said in so little time. Very great job i will definatly read more great job.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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