Shattered

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  • Love

    Shattered

    It's work to work up the courage to say love/
    It hurts to say goodbye when they want you to stay love/
    No matter how many days the pain remains love/
    Waitin for the day when you regain the same love/
    And the outcome, A eruption of mixed emotion/
    A roller coaster of feeling one can't break free from/
    The mind is always thinking, question and answer seeking/
    worn down and tired with no chances of sleeping/
    Visions fill the head with hope it won't get/
    The thought to call one more time just wont quit/
    Tell yourself you hope all their dreams come true/
    truth is your hurt and you want them to hurt too/
    Trying to have fun cuz thats how time flies/
    Another shot to stop the thoughts from coming by/
    Block em out and pretend that they don't matter/
    While you repair the heart broken apart shattered/

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    Niecy commented on Shattered

    12-18-2009

    YEAH....I KNOW IT HURTS! POWERFULLY PENNED!!! KUDOS

    gjmichele77 commented on Shattered

    05-11-2009

    Keep writing. This really hit home. Plus you have excellent form, rhyme and meter. I like it! Michele

    gjmichele77 commented on Shattered

    05-11-2009

    Keep writing. This really hit home. Plus you have excellent form, rhyme and meter. I like it! Michele

    gjmichele77 commented on Shattered

    05-11-2009

    Keep writing. This really hit home. Plus you have excellent form, rhyme and meter. I like it! Michele

    gjmichele77 commented on Shattered

    05-11-2009

    Keep writing. This really hit home. Plus you have excellent form, rhyme and meter. I like it! Michele

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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