Screaming endlessly

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Screaming endlessly

In my dreams I've died,
In a thousand different ways.
Felt all kinds of different pain.
But the latest,
The most painful.
Was by your hands.
I felt you rip me apart,
Watched as you dipped your hands in my blood,
And I screamed endlessly.
I never thought it would be you,
That caused my final breath.
Never imagined it would be you,
To hurt me the most.
Death by your hands,
A nightmare to rival all.
I felt you rip me apart
Watched as you dipped your hands in my blood
And I screamed endlessly

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wildpendigus commented on Screaming endlessly

06-10-2009

I like this poem , it could be lyrics for a R&B song, but it is just a nice put together poem, with a funky beat nice rythmn section, and drums, lead and bass guitar could be a nice song even a hit. ask me how I know I'm in music so I can tell you so, grecowong@yahoo.com

btandntmom commented on Screaming endlessly

04-28-2009

This is very good. I hope you read some of mine I don't feel alone.Some of mine are dark.

dahlusion commented on Screaming endlessly

03-10-2009

Perfectly Gothic, and tasty with blood and screams.

Shadow2u commented on Screaming endlessly

02-11-2009

The emotion comes through best in the imagery of your heart being ripped out.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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