Say Good-Bye-Response to "You Don't Care"

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    Say Good-Bye-Response to "You Don't Care"

    He does care
    Just not about you
    You have too much time
    With nothing to do
    You make it so hard
    To give him your heart
    Wish he could put back
    What you took apart
    He’s with me now
    But please don’t hate
    It’s a shame you lost
    Someone so great
    You push him away
    Gave him room to explore
    Now I can love him
    And give him so much more
    You want him back
    He just don’t want you
    To bad
    To sad
    There’s nothing to do
    Calm down its ok
    There’s no need to cry
    He’s not yours anymore
    It’s’ time to say good-bye

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    aggieprof commented on Say Good-Bye-Response to "You Don't Care"

    04-23-2009

    Great. I love the natural rythm.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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