Empty Truth

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  • Confusion

    Empty Truth


    I have a hard time expressing
    The way that I feel about you
    My body is telling me yes
    But my mind doesn’t know what to do
    When I first spoke to you
    I liked you
    When I first met you
    I fell for you
    When I first hugged you
    I felt warm inside
    It was a certain feeling
    That I could not hide
    When I first kissed you
    My heart melt
    I really don’t know what you felt
    You said that you’ll love me
    But do you know what love means?
    You say you like me
    But that’s not how it seems
    You say you care for me
    And that’s not all
    You say you’ll listen to me
    And not let me fall
    You said you’d understand me
    And hold me when I cry
    You said you’d protect me
    But that was just a lie
    My heart has been broken
    And broken again
    The pain burns deep
    To deep for it to mend
    I wanted to love you
    And never leave your side
    I don’t have anything left
    My soul has run a hide

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    BlueStar commented on Empty Truth

    07-07-2009

    I really like this....oddly i feel like this also.

    aggieprof commented on Empty Truth

    04-23-2009

    Very good. Very touching and heart felt. But I don't like the last line.

    Muki commented on Empty Truth

    03-09-2009

    Dear I feel that this was wrotte for ,I have a feeling that everybody thing's same. Very good with lot of emotions.

    Drivingczar commented on Empty Truth

    03-07-2009

    Nice verse!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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