Sanity's Curse

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    Sanity's Curse

    We structure our mind

    And guide our thoughts

    To excel in this, our world.

    We never question,

    Nor do we let guidelines burn.

    We sacrifice our creative

    Delirium for externally

    Prescribed intelligence.

     

    Here, I say, Now I say,

    Destroy the sanity,

    Release the order

    Question all, even me,

    Let insanity take hold

    To bring us to a new world

    Of unquestionable genius.

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    whiteoleander commented on Sanity's Curse

    12-10-2009

    brilliant you have a beautiful mind and i relate to your work.. 10 for me
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    graceladymn commented on Sanity's Curse

    10-25-2009

    We do have to break outside the ranks once in awhile and start a new trend that's for sure, sometimes we can do it right in the center of the line and start a renewal right in the crowds.
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    cmlestrade commented on Sanity's Curse

    10-19-2009

    Wow. That's a big order and what would happen? As insane as you claim to be you're quite sane and ingenious. what happens when the literal mad man practices his brand of insanity? Who stops him? Does he eat babies, torch buildings, create unnecessary chaos? come on, that's a huge jump even for you. Great poem, I hope it never comes to fruition but I do wish we could all practice creativity without to much censorship.
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    SoundingStorm

    10/21/2009

    The point of this poem was not to point out that I am THAT insane. I mean merely that we cannot always just accept what is, follow norms and society if we truly wish to reach genius level. Not the insanity of eating babies. Though unnecessary chaos can be quite entertaining.

    DarkChi commented on Sanity's Curse

    10-19-2009

    awesome! this speaks to me, telling me that insanity is okay. and not to fear the insane.
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    Gracey commented on Sanity's Curse

    10-19-2009

    haha, I thought you said you where bad LOL....this is good! destroy the sane........great message (Y) i love this :)
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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