Lied to Remember
Sweet remembered lines,
Through her forgotten sighs.
Whispered phrase, tickled ear.
All this lost and ignored;
All love dismissed,
I have fallen in her eyes.
And so I soar unseen
In a land all my own,
To the end I cannot view.
Lied to Remember
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charmlessman2d commented on Lied to Remember
06-06-2010
- love how this is short and to the point. and i love how it ends abrupt and isn't your obvious rhyme scheme set up. it kind of just hangs there the way you exit the scene in this story. good work on this one.
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