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  • Sadness

    sad

    sad, is something you feel,
    something you expirence,
    and something you see.

    but something thats really sad to see,
    is your hero, crying, asking for help,
    telling himself over and over that he failed,
    saying he failed as a father and a provider.

    seeing him cry and say those things,
    can tear your heart,
    hearing him cry, and ask for help is torture.

    so you think thats sad?
    your wrong,
    it's depressing.

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    optimistic commented on sad

    05-13-2009

    Great poem yet I don't know keep on writing

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on sad

    04-07-2009

    no bad but your young.. i expect great thing from you.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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