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    this is how i felt during the school year

    mirror

    I look in the mirror to check on my make up,
    but when i look, 
    i don't see me.
    Instead i see someone else standing there,
    staring back at me.
    The girl I see is sad with pain,
    and longs to be loved,
    but there's no love for her.
    So i stand there, and look in the mirror,
    Just to see this girl looking right back at me.
    Then i realize, it's me.
    But I'm hidden.
     I'm hidden behind the make-up,
    the accerioses,
    the hair and clothes,
    and i ask myself
    "who am i anymore?"

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    twilightchick’s Poems (31)

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    Lights Flicker 2
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    Dissapear 2
    Almost Full 0
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    battle 0
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    mask 2
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    rememeber 0
    her death 0
    somebody help me 1
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    cigarrete 1
    staying part2 1
    running part1 1