mask

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    im not the only one to wear a mask, but evry singler person wears a mask, to hide the treu them just to fit in or to take one by surprise.

    mask

    i wear this mask for many reasons,
    i wear it to hide the real me.
    i wear it to bo someone im not,
    i wear it to try to fit in.
    not only do i wear one mask, but many.
    i have one to hide from my parents, all the things i do.
    i have one to be good at school, and not to turn into the rebel i am.
    and one to cover my tear stained face from concernerd glares.
    ~ because of all my masks,
    i dont know who i am anymore.
    so now i add another mask to my collection.
    i add the mask of someone who's confused on who she is, and why she's here.

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    Qualin commented on mask

    07-10-2010

    UN-MASK YOURSELF..COME FORTH SO I MIGHT SEE FAIR LADY...I THINK THIS IS A FAIR DEMAND FOR YOUR WRITING IS GOOD AND I BET UNDER THE MASK LIES A BEAUTIFUL LADY...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

    honesty34 commented on mask

    07-28-2009

    awww....this poem is alittle sad but very good and i noticed you have a very good way of expressing exactly how you feel in your poetry

    twilightchick

    07/30/2009

    thank you, i dont really try to show it,lol, i just go with the flow when i write

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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