sad and beautiful dream

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    sad and beautiful dream

     I am in a car with townsmen

    we are searching

    I am sensing
    I find a home it is my home

    a nicer home than the one before it
    and yet somehow the same
    It is light and fresh and woody with plants and peaceful
    and among the dead that suddenly appear to me
    one by one
    sitting in silence
    I am seeking you
    I turn around and you are there smiling and hugging me
    if only your were here to hug me now
    your hair your smile your motherly eyes
    where are the men who will take me to you?
    where is this sweet home?
    sadness and frustration
    restless waking
     feeling so alone and cold and wrought with heartache
    for the weight of the world
     
    sorrow is losing someone you love

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    WordSlinger commented on sad and beautiful dream

    11-11-2010

    Ok you asked me to critique, and Im going to try, but this is what I apreciate, I like dream poetry, and it is a realm all it's self, so you did well with mystic setting. As a poem with your style, I find it great, so ty WS, here is a link to read- http://www.originalpoetry.com/forum/view/topic/topic_id/4018
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    LadyLuck commented on sad and beautiful dream

    11-05-2010

    WoW! Nice work. probably not your best but still a very good poem to be had and read by others im sorry you lost some one dear to you but your dreams is only one place of which you two will see eachother
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    shywoodrose

    11/05/2010

    thanks lady!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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