one of those guys

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    one of those guys

    It does not behoove you to be sweet and sour in the same sentence
    When I look at you I think of the way evil and vile share letters
    It is not fair for beauty to be trampled by swine
    Especially with such precious time
    I don't like sounding judgemental but you give me the creeps
    I'm afraid for your life and the life you lead
    I hope you see what I mean when I say
    Maybe you should walk the other way.

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    sunshine33710 commented on one of those guys

    08-15-2010

    That was good but why does he give you the creeps and why are you afraid of his life and the life that he lead?

    shywoodrose

    08/16/2010

    well, its about a young man that my friend is dating that likes to live dangerously then treat her like sh*#. He reminds me of my dad which makes me fear for his life and i can only hope and pray that he finds God, or just doesn't stay mean and abusive...

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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