RIDING THE RAILS

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    Written during a tumultuous, uncertain time in a relationship.

    RIDING THE RAILS



    We've both got ourselves
    on this railroad track.
    I'm facing forward
    and you're facing back.
    I'm look ahead
    to find out where we're going
    and you won't turn around
    so you've no way of knowing.
    I'm anxious to see
    what's around the next bend
    and you're talking about
    all the places we've been.
    So here's my advice
    and I'll say it quite plain.
    Either watch where we're headed
    or get off this train.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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