Rain on a Metal Roof

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    Rain on a Metal Roof

     Rain on a metal roof,
    Humms me to sleep...
    Abstract and random,
    With perfect percussion...
    Heavy sheets pound down,
    Moving from one end to the other...
    Then disappear,
    As I slip into slumber...
    Peaceful rest awaits a new day,
    Filled with fresh clean air and life...
    Just waiting to be lived,
    Oh, JOY!!!

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    chwriter commented on Rain on a Metal Roof

    08-13-2009

    can actually get a vivid picture of the rain pouring down on your roof and the sounds.peaceful and comforting,good poem.
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    Tempestlady commented on Rain on a Metal Roof

    08-01-2009

    One of my husbands favorite lullabies. Like the rhythm, missedthe rhyme. Wonderful imagery, write on....
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    WordSlinger commented on Rain on a Metal Roof

    07-29-2009

    cool, I hear this all the time, I install these for a living, and they say the rain relaxes the soul, good write.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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