"Shhhhhh Juslisten"

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    "Shhhhhh Juslisten"
    One day it'll come,
    the answer lies beyond the tongue
    In the space between words and thoughts is where I reside
    But at times,
    I find it difficult to find my way home
    so I wander,
    squandering precious moments,
    thinking noisy thoughts
    exhausting every bit of energy
    propelling me deeper into the land of the lost.
    Then suddenly I remember the answer.
    And just like that,
    I silence my thoughts.

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    Hiporlacking commented on "Shhhhhh Juslisten"

    07-05-2010

    I dig this piece. To me you are talking about inspiration for a writer.. "In the space between words and thoughts is where I reside" is a great line...but I think you should change it to "the space in between words and thoughts..." To me it flows better...but what do I know. Nice job.
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    wheelsal commented on "Shhhhhh Juslisten"

    06-20-2009

    Well said, well written and to the point. It took two reads to remember I go here also much tooooooooo often.
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    CongoNetherland commented on "Shhhhhh Juslisten"

    06-20-2009

    Again, I love the concepts here. I am more inclined to this type of poem. But most people want definite concrete descriptions to hold the hand of this concept through the idea of the poem. It is a two-fer thing. I am not always good at it mself, but see it for what it is. Give the blind something to see, and the thoughtful something to think about. Together it makes a great union.
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    Phoenix9 commented on "Shhhhhh Juslisten"

    02-17-2009

    good message,nice poem
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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