Tempy commented on Mind Company

08-23-2009

hair sporadic thoughts spill on this paper,sentences are delivered, pen slithers across the page swiftly i can see neck DON'T THINK I said, SEE, I said legs knees down now they are yours mind visiting mind thanks for inviting me in arms crate your dialogue sporatic though as an offering thighs play with it, use it dance I said t shirt There's no sense in this for the 5 senses do not apply art, words transforming into silent images silhouetting across the brightened screen of your mind give it color give it features face senses taste touch smell hear see eyes mouth nose ears toungue mental flashed the think pen slithers across the page swiftly symbols are pieced together to display mental pictures flashed by words DON'T THINK, see the images and figures that miraculously form in your mind

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knight4696 commented on Mind Company

08-23-2009

Sporadic thoughts pieced together as an offering now they are yours mind visiting mind thanks for inviting me in What a great verse and no, thank you for inviting me in!

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CongoNetherland commented on Mind Company

06-20-2009

This is an awesome deconstruction of the creative process - except you gave no imagery at all! How did you do that? You are the David Copperfield of imagery! You worried so much about symbols of imagery that we didn't get any. Even still, you did provide the raw stuff of imagery - desire and concept unformed - which is very cool. Usually, it is the other way around: an image with no concept behind it.: such as Gnashing teeth and I fall" . . . . ? Which is a big wtf moment. At least this gives us a truth: the dsire to communicate beond simple images.

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