"My Shoes"
My shoes,an expression of me for the world to see. Chocolate brown nikes with the orange laces show traces of love I have for my shoes. Thick black soles pound the ground with each defining step. I swept the all black recs off the shelf to help my common wealth satisfy my taste to the base of my shoe tongue. A shoe stain hurts like red bruised skin,wiped it clear no more smear. Black & purple nikes that my counter part loves,like gloves stick to the contours of her feet. Laces long as her legs cross like bows of ribbon on a christmas gift. Expressions of me come through my shoes"My Shoes"
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shakeme4life commented on "My Shoes"
09-22-2010
- That is a cute poem , i let my son read this one , so he can take better care of his own shoes
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09/22/2010
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lostsoul17 commented on "My Shoes"
11-25-2009
- interesting out look very different but good read
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jesterescapade commented on "My Shoes"
10-23-2009
- NIce read with a little whimsy in there. It has a nice flow to it. Keep writing.
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10/31/2009
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lucky62 commented on "My Shoes"
10-21-2009
- You can tell a lot about a person by their shoe's. Where their going, where they been. You have sneaker fever like my 19 yr old son lol.........nice read.......
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ciegee commented on "My Shoes"
10-21-2009
- Your shoe poem is very fun. Keep writing you have a fun perspective.
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