"Hard Times"

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    I've been though alot in my life but there's always someone who is going  or been though worse. So here's my opinon on how to overcome Hard Times. Please write me and let me know what you think weather it's good or bad. 

    "Hard Times"

    Some people take the easy road and forget about the hard,
    While others get dealt the hand with all the wrong cards,
    The last few years I have noticed that life's unfair---
    There are only a few that really care,
    So to all the rest,
    I wish you the best,
    But these will be the people I will leave behind,
    There will only be an image lost in my mind,
    When things get tuff and times get hard,
    your life's tattooed, you become permanently scared,
    These are the time when you learn life's hardest lessons,
    The answers are clear but only in heaven,
    So remember to be happy and never complain,
    Cause life's to short to feel such unbearable pain,
    You got to live everyday like it's your last,
    Because it will be over ALL TOO FAST!!!!!!!!!

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    NyNy100 commented on "Hard Times"

    01-14-2018

    In a blink of a eye!! Fast
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    surealworld commented on "Hard Times"

    06-25-2009

    This poem I like, because it portrays worldly society, and the Christian life in a realistic light. So many so called Christian ministers have preached the lye that if you are right with God, then He will bless you with worldly possessions . But the truth is God want to use you as a vessel to bring others to faith in Him. So I will a lot of times bring His Children through some pretty dark valleys , so that other may see the power of faith at work. Be cause when we are at the end of our selves , only then can people see God at work. We also have to remember that what God has chosen to give to one person , many be a what God will bless another person with, because even though we follow the same God, doesn't mean we have the same purpose in God's will. It reminds me when Peter ask Jesus what would happen to John, when Jesus just got done telling Peter what manner of death he would face later in life. Jesus answered Peter, " If I have His tarry until My return, what is that to you? You follow Me. Most early Christian face horrible death because their stand for Christ . Where do these heretical teacher get their idea that Christ in the genie that was just let out of the lamp and He is their servant . who must grant them their every wish just because they ask in His Name?
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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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