"Confused"

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I use to talk to the duded that I really was feeling but he would always tell me good things and do the other. It was like a mind game that could never be figured out. The relationship did not last after I wrote this poem to him. For a while he got it together but then I start to see right through him.

"Confused"

I won't you yes I do,
But you say I broke da rules,
Destroyed the plans that was made for me and you,
Letting you up grade me you say that I refused,
But the only thing I did was let you make me more confused,


Bring you heart ach,
then I brong you pain,
Dis you ova da bowl as if you was a lame,
Is this how you feel, is it really true,
What about the good times cause now baby I'm confused,


At 1st you say you love me,
Away is where you shove me,
Place your self in my shoes
Now don't you feel confused,


Instead of my man, now you want to be my brother,
But in your letter it seem to me that you want to be my lover,
Which one you rather be, it's up to you to choose,
And stop playing with my heart cause it to now is confused,


To your letters I go to sleep,
To your voice I shed the blues,
Boy you sending me mixed emotions,
Cause I'm fucked up and ALL CONFUSED!!!!!


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NyNy100 commented on "Confused"

01-14-2018

U need to write a book 📚

Heatherjwill commented on "Confused"

06-26-2009

not bad you can tell how your feeling ont his its coming out all over the page

NyNy100

06/26/2009

Thanks For the fedback.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

NyNy100’s Poems (7)

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"Appreciated Moment" 1
"ME-N- YOU" 2
BEHIND THIS STEAL DOOR 3
"Dreams" 1
"Timed Served" 1
"Confused" 2
"Hard Times" 2