"Dreams"

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    Poem Commentary

    SOMETIMES YOU GET TIRED OF PEOPLE TELLING YOU THAT YOU CAN'T OR JUST WHAT  TO DO WITH YOUR LIFFE, AND IN THIS POEM I'M EXPRESSING BUT AT THE SAME TIME ASKING SOME QESTIONS THAT I FEEL CONTAINS TO MY FEELINGS!!!

    "Dreams"

     Can I live my own dreams
    Or do my own thing
    Without people looking down my back?

    For once can I shine
    Tell people the time
    When I shall no longer lack?

    Blind or can see
    Should people judge me
    Without knowing the facts?

    Can I live my life
    Out the eye's of my sight
    And still be ALRIGHT?!!!

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    NyNy100 commented on "Dreams"

    01-14-2018

    Do dreams come true
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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