"Eruption"

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    "Eruption"

    The time is ticking
    I'm going nowhere fast.
    I am looking for a dream but I am caught up in the past.
    I can't find the answer,my mind is boggled and forgot!
    dancing through my memory is only painful and distrot!

    Smoking like a chimney life is hurtful and unrest
    My emotions are uneasy.My mind unraveled and distressed
    Grabbing onto what ever holds my hand and doesn't leave me all alone

    theres no where i can run to. Iv'e tried to call you on the phone.
    "ring""ring "ring" Ah! I have been left here on my own!
    the voices that I hear are all barried deep inside
    They call to me! They yell at me! They say why don't you run and hide!

    Work is getting harder. My hours are less and less
    The bills are running through the roof, my life is such a mess!

    I can feel my heart pounding harder I am about to lose control
    I know theres always a bridge in life but have no money for the toll!
    The kids are running through the house with the dog not far behind!
    If that dog barks one more time I'm about to lose my mind!

    Tic  tic tic
    The presure is over flowing and my patience is running thin!
    Its "Eruption" Time again!!!





     

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    cheronld commented on "Eruption"

    04-24-2010

    I like your analogies....its really a cool poem..I really liked the line about life and not being able to pay the toll....been there and living that..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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