Angel above my bed!
I woke up early and stubled out of bed with my vision half blurred and these voices in my head hearing a delightful melody and some words that someone said "your lookin toward the future but you can't forget the past the mistake you have made haven't been paid for the unforgiven trash...In time you'll see what I mean as you walk away from the helpless and the unknown tomorrow has all been borrowed so dig down deep and don't you weep for a dollar is all it takes as you stand upon your thrown for nothing is free and this you'll see when it time to pay the toll...Many times you have asked for me and this I see as you slowly turn your head the table is turning a your soul slowly keeps burning for I am the angel abouve your bed..I am here to help you change your ways to help you pray God sent me to you at last.Angel above my bed!
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sharenhansen commented on Angel above my bed!
12-31-2010
- excellent good luck in finding the right lady happy new year be safe
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Chaos128 commented on Angel above my bed!
10-08-2009
- In “Angel above my bed!” I see a short, passionate stream of consciousness with a clear and urgent message. Your technique here has breathless immediacy, but remains coherent. My only criticism, T, is the typos (nothing is as subjective as poetry so it’s always possible that “typos” are deliberately applied to achieve a desired effect, but it just doesn’t seem that way here). Readers will be less likely to respect your efforts if it appears that you don’t respect it enough to compose it with care. Creativity is a positive force and I’m glad to see anyone partake of it. As with any activity, the more you practice, the better you get. In the end, though, the only one who can decide whether you got it right is you. I look forward to reading more of your work! -Chaos128-
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10/08/2009
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melanie23 commented on Angel above my bed!
09-23-2009
- very well done. heartfelt. it was a very gd read. i look forward to more with this kind of depth from u n the future.
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09/26/2009
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ravenrose commented on Angel above my bed!
09-23-2009
- its different. thats good. no one is to be alike. it was good
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09/26/2009
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HeroOfWriting commented on Angel above my bed!
09-23-2009
- The past is history, the future is a mystery, but the present is a gift, hence it's name. But you can learn many things in history, to help better your future.
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09/26/2009
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