playground

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playground

my mind is like a living playground
how it plays so many tricks up there
and if it's the playground i'm the child
child over protective of what mine

mine...

or a least what i think it mine
you think i was a slave master
because people are mine to
like a toy in my room

toy...

to compare a toy to a living this is truly
insane but it true
they are all the same thing to me
but unlike an toy

a person can leave

A PERSON CAN LEAVE
a toy that can hate you
and walk away
and you can lose it
forever if it feels the need
even if you gave it everthing
it can just find a new owner 
what do you do with toys as bad
as this?
destroy it
or destroy it's new master

and let it hate you
 
or let it go
and be alone

but to be with it out of self pity 
it worst then be alone
so for now i will be a child
and be over protective of whats mine
because being the child that i am
i can find a new toy

so let the old ones leave
let them find new owners
but what if they want to be the toy again


and i find a owner that not so nice

childern do play very bad games

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indiancowboy91 commented on playground

07-07-2009

I think you need to go back to school. This is not poetry, it's more like jabberwocky. I can't understand why this site allows something like this to be added as poetry.

baddollyr2

07/08/2009

you know art is something that change from person to person if i was you and your so into poetry as you say you should have ask me to edit it or looked at my other ones but you didn't and on top of that you don't have one poem on your page. not that's not right

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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