black water

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    black water
    it's crazy how this can make you feel
    it's insane how people can ever leave
    or the it is the fact that they don't fall in
    how can they not fall in
    fall in to this place where peace is around you
    but the peace haves it price
    like it always dones
    this place will take you
    it will eat you
    it will use you
    and it will give you everthing
    this water
    this darkness
    it really can intoxicant you
    it cares for you
    it loves you
    but
    but how do people leave this place...
    this place of forever peace...
    how do you leave...
    how do you leave these arms

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    trets commented on black water

    06-30-2009

    wow! I seriously just fell in love with this poem! i had no idea that last line was coming up. that was great honestly great work
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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